writing goal

My goal in writing is: 
Try and keep the reader interested in what they are reading.
I have chosen this goal because:
I want to move my vocabulary up to the standard.
To achieve this goal I will need to:
look at some of the banish boring words and change the words said, went, when and how into some more interesting words.

poetry

Over the last couple of weeks we have been doing poetry in writing. Some of the poems we had to write were Haiku poems, Diamond poem and a  sensory poem.

What am I learning: In writing I have been learning how to write poem.
This shows my learning: This work shows what I have been learning because I have added one of the poems a wrote and have said what I have been learning.